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Frank Vetere's avatar

Reads like an instalment of Masterpiece Theatre! Very clever!

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Guya by Zayq 🌈🔥🍌's avatar

Captain Lancaster is a significant missed opportunity. And I am sure of it!

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Mark Olmsted's avatar

Of course, in my mind he is one of your AI creations, who actually found great happiness with a first mate who was filled his uniform equally well.

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Guya by Zayq 🌈🔥🍌's avatar

Hmm...you are setting me thinking there...x

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Mark Olmsted's avatar

This was some flash fiction based on an AI creation I think you'll appreciate.

http://thetrashwhisperer.blogspot.com/2023/01/two-edwardian-gentlemen-very-short.html

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Guya by Zayq 🌈🔥🍌's avatar

I do like it, and I like the format too. Shorter than my shortest pieces but you can tell a story still, or explain a character x

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